Hey Katie, I like the plot of your opening. The unknown texts the character gets makes the opening very spooky and makes the character want to watch and find out what happens. I like the ending as it leaves it on a cliffhanger, what happens to the victim and who the mysterious character is.
This is a good opening sequence and the story you are trying to tell is clear. The music is eery and is tense and you dont know what is going to happen next. The framing and shots that have been used is good. The location of coming from school was a good idea cause it makes it more wrong and not nice to be getting stalked.
To improve you could maybe of had a clearer shot of the phone and the texts it was saying and added some effects to make it a little more jumpy
The music helps produce a suspicious atmosphere along with the variety of camera shots making it appear that the character is being watched or followed. The titles also suit the mood and the theme of the introduction really well.
This is a good opening sequence, and by opening it with the actor telling the audience whats going on by being on the phone, it works well. The music certainly adds to the feel of the video, it gives it an eery feeling, Overall, a good opening sequence
Really good film opening I really like the music you have used as it creates a tense and spooky atmosphere. i really like how it groes from being in colour to black and white becasue it makes it more spooky, I like how you have used lots of following shots to promote the stalker.
The ending of this is really effective as you do not know what is going to happen to the girl and leads it nicley on to the beginning of the film.
To improve maybe fade the music out at the ending, but it was really good well done
Hello Katie, I think that you have chosen a good story line for you opening sequence however I think that it becomes a little confusing through the middle of the sequence, this could be improved by adding in a voice over to make things clearer.
Hey Katie, I like the plot of your opening.
ReplyDeleteThe unknown texts the character gets makes the opening very spooky and makes the character want to watch and find out what happens.
I like the ending as it leaves it on a cliffhanger, what happens to the victim and who the mysterious character is.
This is a good opening sequence and the story you are trying to tell is clear. The music is eery and is tense and you dont know what is going to happen next. The framing and shots that have been used is good. The location of coming from school was a good idea cause it makes it more wrong and not nice to be getting stalked.
ReplyDeleteTo improve you could maybe of had a clearer shot of the phone and the texts it was saying and added some effects to make it a little more jumpy
Overall a good piece of work.
The music helps produce a suspicious atmosphere along with the variety of camera shots making it appear that the character is being watched or followed. The titles also suit the mood and the theme of the introduction really well.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good opening sequence, and by opening it with the actor telling the audience whats going on by being on the phone, it works well. The music certainly adds to the feel of the video, it gives it an eery feeling, Overall, a good opening sequence
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ReplyDeleteReally good film opening I really like the music you have used as it creates a tense and spooky atmosphere. i really like how it groes from being in colour to black and white becasue it makes it more spooky, I like how you have used lots of following shots to promote the stalker.
The ending of this is really effective as you do not know what is going to happen to the girl and leads it nicley on to the beginning of the film.
To improve maybe fade the music out at the ending, but it was really good well done
Hello Katie,
ReplyDeleteI think that you have chosen a good story line for you opening sequence however I think that it becomes a little confusing through the middle of the sequence, this could be improved by adding in a voice over to make things clearer.
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